I know writers who hate the very thought of writing a
synopsis. Some say it stifles their creativity when it comes down to writing
the book. Others say they don’t want to know what happens until a situation
shows up organically in their writing. But when trying to find an agent, or sell
an idea to an editor, a clear, concise synopsis is an important tool.
Preparing a Synopsis: The author’s name and working
book title should be in a header on every page, with the pages numbered
consecutively. The text should be double spaced within 1 inch margins.
A rule no one ever explains is why a synopsis is written in
present tense, but it is.
Synopsis Content: Stick to essential details. Boring
clutter confuses the reader. Some writers start by listing the names of the
main characters and their ages. There are a variety of ways to write a
synopsis. I know writers who like to tell the highlights of every chapter. They
don’t show chapter numbers, but list exciting events that moves the chapter
forward.
The words you use in a synopsis are chosen for impact. They
speak of character, of situation, of motivation, of conflict and of resolution.
Your style should be showcased: Your voice, your
method of presentation, your individuality should stand out in a synopsis. You
want your uniqueness to shine through.
There really is no right or wrong way to organize a synopsis
as long as you give the reader enough information about the characters, the
setting and points that are of importance in how your characters travel through
your plot. You want to show the time period of the story and give a sense of
tone. By that I mean is your story funny, poignant, or ominous. Or it may be a
combination of emotional effects.
If you don’t introduce all of the characters that appear in
the synopsis at the beginning, underline any new character and introduce them
in the order they would appear in your story.
Some writers say to never use dialogue, but others believe
judicious use of snippets of dialogue may help define a character’s role in the
book.
It’s helpful if you organize the scenes you want to
highlight prior to beginning to write your synopsis. You want the story to
unfold naturally to the reader, and knowing your scenes keeps you from adding extraneous
bits and pieces.
A synopsis starts at the beginning of the story. It presents
a brief but interesting capsule of the content, or body of the work, and tells
how the story ends. Never leave a synopsis hanging, hoping to intrigue an
editor or agent. They will not be intrigued.
In simplistic terms, list main characters, show their
internal and external conflicts, salt in character development, spell out
motivations for them to change, and give the resolution that brings the book to
a satisfying conclusion. Expect that new
problems, new twists and turns for your characters will show up in the nitty
gritty detail that comes with fleshing out your book. A synopsis is merely a brief overview.
Excellent post, Roz. I'm several books in, and I still despise writing a synopsis. I kind of think that's just the way it's going to be. :-)
ReplyDeleteLiz, I've never met anyone who "loves" to write a synopsis. I like to follow mine, and panic when the characters want to go off on their own.
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Hi Roz!
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I have a tough time writing a synopsis before the book is written because I'm not a plotter, but once the book is complete, it's a little easier:)
xo
Jen
Roz - excellent timing! I just finished a synopsis and am letting it 'brew' over the weekend to send off Sunday night. I've printed out your post to use as a guide before I hit 'send.' You and I have talked about how much I hate synopses. The best part about having sold a lot of books is when an editor says, 'Just give me a page of what you have in mind.' Of course that won't happen to me anymore since it's been so long between career A and career B. But there's something comforting in knowing no one else is crazy about writing a synopsis, either. When you're in the throes of creation and characters take over and deviate from the plan, I never know whether it's lack of discipline on my part or creative genius.
ReplyDeleteTerrific post, Roz! It is interesting that we write synopsis in the present tense ... I never questioned that before. For me, the challenge is to be clear enough with the internal and external conflicts and character motivations, but to leave enough wiggle room for those organic developments to happen when writing. I dread writing a synopsis, but when finished it feels good to have articulated my plan.
ReplyDeleteJust checking in again, and it's gratifying to see none of you say "yay, I get to write a synopsis". Muriel, you so hit the nail square when you said if the book strays from the accepted synopsis is it lack of us wrestling characters into line, or really good to let the characters drive the direction when the story hits a twist or turn.
ReplyDeleteAfter I posted I was thinking I should have written about trying to get ready for the visit by my kids and grandkids while trying to whip a book into submission. There's beds to get out, laundry to catch up, cookies to make, and groceries to buy. I think that's a whole other aspect of life to wrestle into shape. Thanks everyone for your insightful comments.
What a great post Roz, thanks. For you, and the other authors here, if you do stray from the synopsis has an editor ever called you on it?
ReplyDeleteGetting a book into shape when family is coming? I think you just found your next post!
Shannon, I haven't been called on straying from my synopsis. Wonder if others here have. I'm sure it happens if it strays too far.
ReplyDeleteHi Roz and Shannon! I asked my editor if she minded if I killed off a character which had a profound effect on that story and she loved the idea :)
DeleteTrue, Roz - I've never ahd an editor complain if the storyline deviates from the synopsis - as long as it works well.
DeleteRoz's weekend synopsis: make beds, no need to vacuum because house is always spotless, oh wait spotlessness results from vacuuming, so get that darn thing out, meanwhile make major trip to grocery store, bake chocolate chip cookies, do two loads of laundry, dried & folded, maybe even ironed? Write thousands of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the helpful tips! I'll think of you over the weekend.
Roz, thanks for the great advice! I haven't met anyone that loves writing a synopsis either.
ReplyDeleteI'm not a plotter either so synopsis kick me in the butt, especially since there's thing I need to research that should go in the synopsis but I don't want to research unless the book sells.
ReplyDeleteI hate writing synopses. Bleah. My partner, David, is better at it. That's the best part of being a team. Our strengths are different.
ReplyDeleteAimee - how does he feel about polygamy?
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