What I love about the heartwarming line is the sweet nature
of the romance. It allows us authors to focus on the characters and their
stories. But it does present a challenge for me; how do I give readers the
little stomach flutters that come from experiencing the character’s physical
relationship. My favorite source of inspiration---Bollywood.
Bollywood movies have strong romantic elements and until the last
decade, explicit physical contact was not culturally appropriate for the
screen. The screen writers of the older Bollywood movies used subtle ways to
show intimacy. It helps that all of the movies are musicals for that added
dimension of surreal romance.
Okay for the fun of it, lets watch a video to see what I’m
talking about. The clip is from the movie Dilwale
and the song is called Gerua. I’ve
recently been obsessed with it not just because it was shot in Iceland (a place
on my travel list), but because it literally sweeps you away.
This is why I love Bollywood videos, there is barely a kiss, the hero and heroine
are fully dressed, and yet I can feel the love and intimacy between the couple---a rub of his chin in her hair, the exhale of her breath on his ear and you can feel the tingles in your arms. It’s this close
emotional intimacy that makes the heartwarming series so special. The line is
sweet but as the editors constantly remind me, that doesn’t mean it has to be
nice.
So I’ve explored various ways to ratchet up that emotional intimacy.
And then the Sergeant’s
Temptation gave me the perfect opportunity. Traditional flirtations were
not going to work with my spit fire heroine, Sergeant Alessa Parrino. Alessa is
no girly-girl. When she tries out for an elite Army unit, she kicks their best
solider to the floor in a hand to hand combat exercise. So she’s not exactly
the type to clutch her heart when a man gives her that smoldering look. Then my
awesome editor, Claire Caldwell came up with the perfect idea to change a scene
and here’s what came tapping out of my keyboard:
“She’s made of titanium,”
Dimples quipped, his characteristic smile lopsided as he grabbed the side of his head that Alessa
had slammed into the wall.
“Everyone has a weak spot, guys, and you need to find hers,” Luke said
firmly.
“Oh, yeah? If you think it’s that easy, why don’t you do it?” Rodgers shot
back. Alessa sensed that Rodgers had been a little hesitant on their second
fight and she’d told him his fear was what made him an easy target. He’d been
afraid of her based on their previous encounter, which made him tentative, and
that hesitation would be the death of him in a real combat situation. She didn’t
have the strength that the men did, so she got the better of them through lightning-fast
moves.
“Yeah, Lieutenant, why
don’t you show us grunts how it’s done,” Dimples jeered.
Alessa looked at Luke and smiled at the panic evident in his eyes. It
would be fun to kick his rear end to the ground; put him in his place. She
cracked her knuckles.
“What, you afraid to get whooped by a girl?” she taunted.
He narrowed his eyes then gestured to Alessa. Luke stepped onto the
rubber mat and held the door while Alessa stepped across the threshold, unable
to contain the smirk on her face. Luke closed the door behind him.
He stepped toward her. The guys wouldn’t be able to hear them with the
door closed but he kept his voice low.
“Are you sure you want to do this?” he asked.
Of course not. Her stomach fluttered as she studied the stormy blues
of his eyes. Fighting with someone meant close body contact. His proximity at
the computer had been enough to supercharge her senses. Was she really ready
for that again? He raised his brows, giving her a way out. All she had to say
was no. She wasn’t required to do this training. After all, she was only the
logistics person. Fighting him was a bad idea. A very
bad idea.
“It’s on,” she said, chin raised.
His eyes darkened and he stepped back from her, his jaw set. There were
no rules in this exercise. The idea was to take down your opponent by any means
necessary using your bare hands. The rest of the team was watching intently
behind the Plexiglas. Her gaze was laser focused on Luke.
Alessa’s martial arts training had drummed into her the importance of
looking into the opponent’s eyes to anticipate his next move. It usually worked
for her, but not this time. Looking into Luke’s eyes was like watching the
swirls of a tornado. Get it together!
He wouldn’t make the first move. In a disciplined fight, offense was
not always the best defense. If she moved first, it would give him time to
react. He would get to decide whether to evade, block or retaliate. He’d be the
one with the choices and she would give away her preferred fight mode. The
movies often showed two adversaries circling each other ready to pounce, but
neither of them did that. They stared at each other for what seemed like hours
but was in fact mere seconds.
Luke wasn’t going to budge. Alessa had to make her move. She led with a
kick, hoping to throw him off balance, but he was expecting it and blocked her
deftly. She anticipated a counter punch, but it never came. She successfully
twisted away from him and they were back in the face off.
He’d had the perfect opportunity to at least get a jab into her, and he
hadn’t taken it. Why? While it was understood that they wouldn’t seriously
injure each other in these exercises, everyone expected to walk away sore and bruised,
including Alessa. The bruises would remind them of their weak spots so they
could protect them better next time. Luke should have taken at least one punch.
Most people thought fighting was about power and speed. And it was. But
it was also about messing with the opponent’s head. Faking left and going right
was the simplistic version of that.
She
inched closer to him. “You’ll regret pulling that punch,” she said, then jabbed
at him with her fists.
I had a lot of fun
writing this scene; how often do you get to write an equally matched hero and heroine fight each
other and their attraction in such a physical way. Like the Gerua video, I also wanted a larger than
life backdrop. So the book starts out in the U.S and then takes the elite unit
to Pakistan and then across a dangerous border to Afghanistan. (PS—there is a making
of Gerua video on youtube if you want to know how they got onto that
iceberg).
I can’t leave
without mentioning the #MysteryPrize giveaway that all of the August
heartwarming authors are doing. Buy any of the four amazing August releases (or
answer a question) to enter
the giveaway.
In addition, I have
a goodreads and an amazon giveaway—all giveaway links are on my website. And yes please, enter
all of them! In addition, if you buy a copy of the Sargeant’s Temptation before
August 5th, please
email me your receipt along with your postal address and I’ll send you this
bag free.
Before I end, onemore awesome Bollywood romantic video. This is from the movie Jodhaa Akbar, a period film about the sixteenth
century Moghul emperor Akbar who marries a reluctant Hindu princess in order to
firm his hold on Indian Territory but ends up falling in love with her. It’s a sweet
video and you get to see an Indian palace (Agra Fort) that you can still
tour today.
Thank you for sharing the video, Sophia. It was exquisitely shot, the scenery is stunning (as is the heroine!) and it effectively illustrates your point.
ReplyDeleteThank you, also, for sharing the terrific excerpt from The Sergeant's Temptation. I wish you all the best with your upcoming release!
Thank you Kate! And wow you are up early in the morning. Aren't you on the East coast?
DeletePS--the heroine (Kajol) is 42 years old.
DeleteI'm in Ontario and an early riser. As for the heroine . . . wow . . . if that's what singing on mountain tops and on glaciers does for you, I want to start doing that. Then again, it might be sweet, tender love! :)
DeleteA great excerpt. Good luck with the release. My favorites are Hallmark movies. I've heard the "cheesy" word used in connection with them sometimes, and I have to admit I don't always like their story treatments, but they're still a favorite way to spend a Sunday afternoon. I'm also partial to Amish romances and--shock!--Heartwarming books!
ReplyDeleteI have a thing for Hallmark movies too. Something about the way they tug at your heartstrings.
DeleteI can certainly see why you're obsessed with the video, Sophia...wow!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite sweet movies are WHEN HARRY MET SALLY, YOU'VE GOT MAIL and WHILE YOU ARE SLEEPING. Yes, they're older, which makes me wonder why Hollywood stopped making such great movies.
Wishing you the best with your August release!
Thanks Jill! And I agree with you. Hollywood (and Bollywood) seem to be moving away from such sweet romances :(
DeleteI love that video, and do go to Iceland! Don't wait. My sister and I went last Christmas/New Year's and loved it. (My sister did a home exchange, and the couple from Iceland spent Christmas in her downtown apt. in Chicago. Economical all around.) The waterfalls alone in the winter landscape...simply breathtaking. But I think your point is so well taken. The excerpt was exciting and clear and the romance came through so well. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Virginia! I have already started by Iceland piggy bank.
DeleteMy favorites are the same as Jill's. Good job with the fight scene!
ReplyDeleteMine too!
DeleteSophia, your video was stunning. It reminded me of the old Cyd Charisse and Gene Kelly musicals like "An American in Paris" in the 1950's with her flowing gown and fabric. Leo and Kate on the front of the Titanic at sunset. Absolutely great! And thanks for sharing your excerpt. I can't wait to read it! Congratulations on your release. (Iceland is now on my list...I just had a friend who went to the film festival there and the videos and photos he shot are amazing!)
ReplyDeleteI think Iceland ended up on one of those number 1 tourist spot lists. But I hear it's pretty cold there year round. Icebergs..:)
DeleteSophia, I always enjoy hearing (seeing in this case) about other authors's inspiration. This book sounds so fun. I love stories where the hero and heroine are so equally matched in strength. A few of my favorite romances are You've got Mail, The Proposal, and Sweet Home Alabama.
ReplyDeleteThese are some of mine too :)
DeleteHi Sophia! I have to admit that was the first Bollywood video (or Bollywood anything) I've ever seen. Methinks I've been sheltered! Wow. Just wow. My favorite sweet movie is when Harry Met Sally, but that's today. Tomorrow it might be different. I love them all!
ReplyDeleteWho can't love Harry Met Sally. Bollywood is literally another world.
DeleteA well-done excerpt, Sophia! I never considered the Bollywood angle before. I will have to turn to it in the future. SABRINA, LOVE ACTUALLY, SWEET HOME ALABAMA form part of my faves list.
ReplyDeleteLove Actually is on the top of my romantic comedy lists. As is Sweet Home Alabama and I forgot about Sabrina...will have to go re-watch. So hard to choose!
DeleteLoved both videos! The music in the second was so...I don't know, just stirred me. And loved the excerpt. Can't wait to read the whole book.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to reading the book.
ReplyDeleteWow. Luke and Alessa sound as though they're perfectly matched, and what a great way to up the tension. Looking forward to the book.
ReplyDeleteSuch a cool post, Sophia, and I loved the excerpt! Bollywood movies are so much fun to watch and you made the perfect comparison :).
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